Wayside Roses –Guo Moruo清晨往松林里去散步，我在林荫路畔发见了一束被人遗弃了的蔷薇。Rambling through a pine forest early in the morning, I came across a bunch of forsaken roses lying by the shady wayside.Q:能否分析一下译文的结构？🎈rambling引导的句子表示伴随，表示主语I在came across的时候同时在做的事情。主语就是I，谓语came across，宾语a bunch of roses。后面额lying by the…就是分词作后置定语，修饰roses。蔷薇的花色还是鲜艳的，一朵紫红，一朵嫩红，一朵是病黄的象牙色中带着几分血晕。我把蔷薇拾在手里了。They were still fresh in colour. One was purplish-red, another pink, still another a sickly ivory-yellow slightly tinged with blood-red. I picked them up in my hand. 🎈“一朵是病黄的象牙色中带着几分血晕”译为a sickly ivory-yellow slightly tinged with blood-red，其中sickly意为“病态的”。另外，ivory-yellow和blood-red的结构都是“实物颜色词＋基本颜色词”，为英语颜色词的常见形式。 青翠的叶上已经凝集着细密的露珠，这显然是昨夜被人遗弃了的。The numerous fine dewdrops on the fresh green leaves clearly showed that the roses had just been cast away the previous night. 🎈原文中“这显然是昨夜被人遗弃了的”，的主语比较抽象，可以理解为是前面整句中所描绘出来的现象，所以在翻译时，除了像译文中选择dewdrops作为主语，也可以用一个句子描述前半句提到的现象之后，用非限制性定语从句，即“，which”进行处理。这是可怜的少女受了薄幸的男子的欺绐？还是不幸的青年受了轻狂的的妇人的玩弄呢？Were they pitiful maidens deflowered by fickle men? Or were they unlucky young men fooled by frivolous women? Q:“欺绐”是什么意思？怎么翻译？🎈“欺绐”就是“欺骗”的意思，文中的内涵意是“糟蹋/玷污”，所以译为deflowered。🔥必背词汇ramble v.漫游，漫步，闲逛(尤指在乡间)英义To walk for pleasure, especially in the countryside例句We spent the summer rambling in Ireland. 我们花了一个夏天漫游爱尔兰。 forsake v.抛弃，遗弃，离开(尤指不履行责任)英义to leave sb / sth, especially when you have a responsibility to stay 近义词abandon例句He had made it clear to his wife that he would never forsake her. 他明确地向妻子说，永远不离开她。 shady adj.背阴的；阴凉的；多阴的英义protected from direct light from the sun by trees, buildings, etc.例句We went to find somewhere cool and shady to have a drink. 我们去找了一个阴凉的地方，喝了一杯。 tinge v.(轻微地)给…着色，给…染色英义to add a small amount of colour to sth例句The sunset tinged the lake with pink.落日把湖水染上淡淡的粉红色。deflower v.奸污(处女)；夺去(女子)的贞操英义to have sex with a woman who has not had sex before· 例句She was enraged with Taylor because he had deflowered her daughter.她对于泰勒非常愤怒，因为他夺去了她女儿的贞操。fickle adj. 英义1.易变的；无常的changing often and suddenly例句The weather here is notoriously fickle. 这里的天气出了名的变化无常。 英义2反覆无常的(of a person 人)· often changing their mind in an unreasonable way so that you cannot rely on them例句a fickle friend 靠不住的朋友 frivolous adj. 愚蠢的；可笑的英义(of people or their behaviour 人或行为)· silly or amusing, especially when such behaviour is not suitable例句frivolous comments / suggestions 愚蠢的话；可笑的建议 🔥重点表达松林pine forest清晨early in the morning无意中发现/偶遇come across一束a bunch of被人遗弃的蔷薇forsaken roses林荫路畔shady wayside颜色鲜艳be fresh in colour紫红purplish-red拾起某物pick sth. up细密的露珠 fine dewdrops遗弃be cast away🔥句子回译1、蔷薇的花色还是鲜艳的，一朵紫红，一朵嫩红，一朵是病黄的象牙色中带着几分血晕。2、这是可怜的少女受了薄幸的男子的欺绐？还是不幸的青年受了轻狂的的妇人的玩弄呢？🔥表达对比来看看「散步」在不同的语境中可以怎么翻译？1.有人在日落时沿太平洋海岸「散步」沉思。Some of the participants walked pensively along the Pacific Coast at sunset. 2.来到这个国家几次后，我听说年轻的情侣晚上会经常到普通江这一段「散步」。Over the course of my visits, I learned that young couples often met for night strolls along this stretch of the Potong. 3.漫游者开始出现了，这些人在街道上有目的地「散步」，却没有明确方向。The flaneur was born: one who wanders the streets with purpose, but without a map.
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